bahu banke jiske aangan main main aayi
aseem pyar ne, uske, bhula diya mujhko bhi .
kabhi beti, kabhi sakhi banke liya sneh maine
aandhi tufan bhi guzar gaye palak jhapakte.
sukh dukh bhi dono ke ek lagne lage
saal baayis jo guzare humne sung sung
kal ki hi jaise baat ho , aisa lage .
ek din aisa bhi aayega socha na tha
reh jayegi jindagi meri aadhi adhuri.
door kahin door chali jayegi kahin
woh jo meri prerna mera utsaah thi
phir bhi na jane kyon ..?
mehsoos yeh hota hai hardam .
yahin kahin aas paas...
yahin kahin aas paas...
roshni hai ..per woh nahin .
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बहुत भावुक कर देने वाली रचना ....
woh jo meri prerna mera utsaah thi
phir bhi na jane kyon ..?
mehsoos yeh hota hai hardam .
yahin kahin aas paas...
roshni hai ..per woh nahin .
रिश्तों में छिपे प्यार और विछोह की पीड़ा का चित्रण करती ;दिल को नम कर देने वाली रचना.....
plz use hindi (devnagri)font namita ji...
gadar intake ;p keep up the good work.
अति सुंदर...
awesum........dii..
all d bst..
aapka..blog..will rock....[:)]
bahut acha laga namita g....
awl d best..
baaz logon ke saath aisa hota hai jis shakhs se aap ko be panah muhabbat hoti hai par aap keh nhi paate..khush qismat hote hain woh log jo apni baath keh paate hain.........aur haan woh log bhi khush qismat hi honge jo aapke aas paas honge........soulful.
Abhivyakti achchhi hai, Namita Ji. Ye apne dil se likhi hai, yah saaf pata chalta hai.
WhoooAaa!!! ThIs One.... Kya tHaa YeH? swEpt off mY feet... So Much SaId In Just a few LineS. HatZ Off, Keep it YoU Di
bohot acche...namita di !!!
very sweet & touching !!
keep it up .. & all d best !!!
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